Will it work? – Part 10

Note: This is a continuation to https://excessbaggageuniverse.wordpress.com/2013/05/24/will-it-work-part-9/

Author: AlexandraTherese

Author’s Note:

Ni hao! After nth century! Nakabalik din ako. Sorry guys dahil masyado nang matagal. Super tambak na rin kasi ang mga gawain namin kaya konti na lang ang oras ko sa pag patuloy nitong story. (This is purely fiction. From Alexa’s imagination only and is not related to the real storyline.) I wanted to thank those persons who are very willing to wait for the continuation of this story though parang pagong na akong magsulat ngayon. Thank you for the patience and hope that I will be able to finish this story para hindi na kayo mabitin. So without further ado, here’s the continuation of will it work.

Happy Reading!

-AlexandraTherese (Alexa)

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Nakaraan…

Maya: Honey, wake up!

He’s still in his deep slumber at may pasnore-snore pa.

Maya: Sir Chief! Gising!

Tulog pa rin.

Maya: Richard, bumangon ka na jan!

Maya turned to her back and saw a water hose. She grabbed it and sprayed it on Richard’s direction na hanggang ngayon ay walang kamalay malay na Maya’s water bag just broke.

Maya: Richard Lim! Bumangon ka na jan!

Biglang napabangon si Richard dahil nagulat siya sa naramdamang pagkabasa ng kanyang katawan. (eh ikaw ba naman kasi ang basain ng tubig while sleeping.haha)

Natauhan din si Richard at lumapit kaagad kay Maya.

Richard: Honey, what are you doing there?

Maya: Hon, my water bag just broke.

Manang Fe: Ricardo, anong ingay yan at bat basang basa ka? O saan kayo pupunta ni…

Richard: Manang, manganganak na po si Maya and we need to go to the hospital. Please paki sunod na lang po ang ibang gamit sa Makati Med tapos paki tawagan nalang si Mommy and Daddy. (sunod sunod na sabi nito.nang makasakay na sila ni maya eh pinaharurot na agad ang kotse)

Continuation…

Manang Fe: Joma! Joma! Gumising ka. Ihanda mo ang sasakyan at aalis na tayo.

Joma: Ho? Manang? Aalis? Sa ganitong oras?

Manang Fe: Bilis na Joma! Manganganak na si Maya. Susunod tayo nila Sabel sa hospital. Maiiwan dito si Doris.

Agad bumangon si Joma at dumiretso sa labas para ihanda na ang sasakyan.

Manang Fe: Sabel dala mo na ba ang lahat ng gamit? Bilisan mo na!

Sabel: Opo Manang.Eto na..

Manang Fe: O sige tayo na. Doris ikaw na muna ang bahala dito.

Habang nasa sasakyan tumatawag na si Manang Fe sabahay nila Donya Emse na kasalukuyang natutulog.

Ring…

Ring…

Ring…

Donya Esme: Dear…(antok mode)…answer the phone…(antok pa rin. May pinagmanahan talaga itong si Ricky.) it’s ringing…

Don Roberto: Hello…

Manang Fe:Hello sir, si Fe po ito. Gusto lang po namin ipaalam sa inyo na papunta na kami ngayon sa makati med ngayon dahil manganganak na po si Maya.

Don Roberto: Ha? I thought sa isang araw pa. Okay sige papunta na kami jan. Hm.. Dear wake up. Its time to see our apo.

Nang marinig ang salitang apo eh napabangon kaagad si Donya Esme. They change clothes and Roberto drove to the hospital.

Nauna nang dumating sina Roberto at Esme sa ospital at pumunta sila sa loob to ask kung nasaan si Maya. They were informed na wala pa namang Maya Lim na naka admit sa ospital kaya tinawagan na ni Donya Esme si Manang Fe.

Donya Esme: Fe, we’re here na pero bakit wala naman dito si Maya?

Manang Fe: Ha? Wala pa ho ba diyan? eh nauna po silang umalis. Donya Esme, malapit na po kami jan.

Donya Esme: Oh sige, dumiretso na lang kayo dito at itatanong ko ulit at baka nalito lang.

Samantala…

Maya: Honey, ang sakit na ng tiyan ko.

Richard: Uhm..ahmm.relax hon. Dito na lang tayo sa shortcut dadaan para mas mabilis.

Maya: Bilisan mo honey.

Richard: Okay, okay. Just breathe.

Beep….

Beep…

Beep…

Richard: Hey, what’s going on there? Bat may traffic ng ganitong oras?

Sidewalk Vendor: May banggaan sir sa unahan. Eh inaayos pa.

Richard: Damn!

Maya: Honey, I think he’s coming.

Richard: Ah. eh. Wait honey. Breathe. Wala pa tayo sa hospital.

Maya: Richard Lim! I think malapit na siya.

Richard: Ha…eh.. (tarantang taranta na si CEO)

Richard: Honey, sa back seat.

He assisted her doon sa backseat. They don’t have a choice. Tiningnan niya ang traffic at masyadong mahaba pa til now. Seeing his wife na nahihirapan na at talagang lalabas na si Alfie, then that’s the time he decided na siya na lang ang magpapa anak kay Maya.

Richard: (In his thoughts) Okay Richard, kaya mo to. Isipin mo na lang you’re just fixing the planes in the hangar.

Maya: Ahhh.. Hon, are you sure about this?

Richard: Just trust me Hon. Okay on my third count..1,2,3 push.

Maya: Ahhhhhhhh….(her hands are covering her face)

Richard: Why are you covering your face? (at nagtanong pa talaga)

Maya: Wala. Ahhhhh..

Richard: (in his thoughts) nahihiya ka pa yata. eh nakita…. ahh.. erase erase..

Richard: Okay honey.Again, 1,2,3. Push…

Maya: Ahhhhhhhh….

Richard: Okay honey, I can see him. One last big push. 1, 2, 3. PUSH….

Maya: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………………………………………

Richard: in his thoughts again (whew mas mahirap pa pala to kesa sa pag aayos namin ng mga eroplano sa hangar.)

After few minutes, they can now hear someone crying. It was a very little voice. He can’t believe it. He’s now holding his son. Very handsome baby. He can’t control himself and tears are now falling. Though there are still blood, he can’t resist to kiss his son. It seems that he’s in the peak of everything. He can’t imagine that he’s now a father. Before, he’s only thinking of himself – home, work, friends. But now, it’s a different chapter in his life. He immediately wrapped his son with the blanket from the bag prepared for Maya’s giving birth. Then all of the sudden, the traffic went off. Is it a miracle or a coincidence, he thought. He realized that Alfie is still connected to his mother (umbilical cord).

Richard: Hello little boy. Welcome to this world. I am your dad. Honey,he’s so handsome. Hon? Hon? Hon? Maya? Wake up. Oh shit! (she’s bleeding)

Maya: Hon…

Richard: Hold on Maya. Malapit na tayo sa hospital.

After Alfie’s arrival, Maya was bleeding. Richard was in panic and was driving too fast. One hand on the steering wheel while the other is holding his newborn. Maya cannot hold Alfie because she fainted due to her bleeding. She’s at the back seat now and Richard tries his very best to reach the hospital as soon as possible. He’s very worried but he believes that Maya can do it.

Few minutes and now they’re at the hospital. He immediately asked for help and then gave his son to the nurses who are now waiting for their arrival. Then, he went to Maya and assisted her. The nurses are all in a hurry and brought Maya and the baby to the emergency room. Richard wanted to come in but he wasn’t allowed.

Richard: Oh please! My wife and my son need me!

Nurse: Sir sorry but you’re not allowed to come inside. Please wait here. Then he closed the door.

Donya Esme: Son, calm down. Everything will be okay. She will be okay.

Richard: Mom… then hugs her mom.

Donya Esme: Don’t worry son.Just trust her. I know that she’ll hold on.

Richard: This is my fault mom. Kung dinala ko na sana siya dito ng maaga.

Donya Esme: Shhhhh..Don’t say that son. Wala namang may kasalanan diba.

Abangan…

Donya Esme: Son, ano ba kasi ang nangyari? Nauna pa kami dito.

Richard: Mom, dahil sa sobra kong taranta naisipan ko na pong dumaan sa shortcut and unfortunately mali ang desisyon ko. Sobrang traffic dahil may banggaan. Kaya po yun, dun na nanganak si Maya sa kotse.

Donya Esme: My goodness, Ricky. So how’s our apo?

Richard: He’s okay mom.

……..

Donya Esme: Oh hello little boy. Welcome to the world. I’m your Lola. Look Roberto, his eyes looks like Ricky’s. And his lips sa Mommy niya.

Don Roberto: Oh dear. Let’s say the combination of them both.

…….

Doris: Ay naku day. Ang cute ng bagets!

Sabel: Oy Doris tumahimik ka nga. Baka magalit si Sir Richard.

Doris: Aba, bakit naman?

Sabel: Parang nag tiger mode ngayon eh.

Doris: Sus..ikaw naman malay mo may problema lang.

Sabel: Yun na nga eh..

…….

Manang Fe: Ricardo…

Ricardo: Manang, ba’t gising pa po kayo?

Manang Fe: Okay ka lang ba ijo?

Richard: Oo naman po Manang. Bakit po?

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Zai jian! Hanggang dito muna. Mag-iisip nanaman si Ms. Alexa ng karugtong! Duo xie!🙂

11 thoughts on “Will it work? – Part 10

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